Evaluation Of the rough cut

When we have finished filming. we went into the media suite and edited our video.

We had to make a rough cut so that the teacher can see how we are doing at the moment and what can be improved. these are the point that we have to make these scene better :

• the slightly shaky part at the beginning
• to remove the clock scene over the victim when he is reading the book
• the point of view shot when the victim is sitting down reading and the killer is walking past the window
• shorten our clip
• alot more close up of the face 
• show more sign of paranoid

However apart from these few problem we other successful scene like slow motion of the glass dropping and when Nahid is on the floor and blood is coming out of his mouth.