Upon viewing this rough cut, we noticed the following problems which we had to address:
- The slight jerking of the camera on the first scene of the house.
- The scenes dragged on for too long.
- The clip of the knocking had to be in sync with the sudden movement of Nahid's head.
- The book reading scene had to have the clock moving in the background to give the effect of a long time period.
Apart from these problems, the use of the glass breaking in slow motion was highly rated by those that viewed it. Also the blood scene in which blood pours out of Nahid's mouth was seen as successful in tricking the viewers into thinking that actual blood was appearing from his head.